Okay, let's address some stuff...

quite entertaining, although it is "more of the same" - much more of the same.
<font size="2" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">I actually went out of my way not to make it a retread of the original. Hence, the new setting, the multiple "species" of sandwich, more "stunts," the kids fighting back etc.

I got the feeling you were editing to the temp score rather than fitting the music to your edit.
<font size="2" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">I don't think I've done that since Twatting Zombies. I'll occassionally trim a shot to fit, but my peeps and I have this uncanny ability to pick a track, lay it over our footage and have it fit perfectly. That brass blast over the lid of the water gun popping off was a complete fluke.

it's quite obvious that your dialogue track still needs work.
<font size="2" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">I forgot to mention that. When I exported it, the wild track was switched off, for some reason. I didn't realise this till I'd spent 3 hours uploading it, so fuck it. You get the gist.

I should've pointed it out, though. My bad.

In "Day of the Bread" you absolutely must work in the line "unless they figured out how to open doors".
<font size="2" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">I like this idea... [img]graemlins/thumbs_up.gif[/img] [img]biggrin.gif[/img]

Only dragging parts I saw was during part 2 when they are walking. That could have been cut down.
<font size="2" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">I thought that too, but I've shown it to a number of people, both online and on DVD, filmmakers and just plain ol' movie fans, and they thought it was quite suspenseful. My editing tutor was particular impressed.

Go figure.

Either way, I'd have trouble cutting it down, 'cos by doing so would result in quite obvious lapses in continuity.

I can absolutely see you coming up with a movie akin to Jackson's "Bad Taste".
<font size="2" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">I thank you. I'm considering looking into shooting a feature next summer. It all depends how this year goes for me, and whether I can get a script up to scratch.

Thanks for the comments, guys.